The Reverse bass is good enough, but i think it lost it's power because of the melody. or probably you're trying to do a Reverse Jumpstyle>?
This is not hardstyle, It's Gabber. But i like the Gabber kick and the dark melody on this song
I would like to give it 5 stars, but for me, the first kick could be used as a Яeverse kick, but i loved the melody and the originality on the melody. i think, if you put on 170.00 bpm, it could be as a happy hardcore
The Kick is too muddy, learn some more of the lowcutting, and the mastering on the kick is not really good. The kick is not a hardstyle kick, because when it comes to Hardstyle, the kick is more like "Gong Gong Gong" or an Old Style.
The Melody is quite neat, but the saw is too pitched, and less on the mastering. Remember, MASTERING is the most critical part on producing a song.
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